feed back on memoir

the person that graded did not give me any 

feed back she said she did not have any feed back 

for me which i actually find really find hard to believe.

how do you want the reader to feel/think after they read your memior

i want people to be happy for me and see that
there parents can be cool at times and if they
do good in school and obey there parents then
hopefully there parents can be cool and they
will probaly have a good kid life or teenage life.