do you think antigone had control over her life?

i think that she did but i also think that her destiny
matches her personality so that every thing that was destined
to come about had something to do with the way she acted.

dramatic irony

the story we read in romeo and juliet that
play had a lot of dramatic irony. The biggest scene
of dramatic irony in romeo and juliet was when
they both died at the same time just like in the antigone.

what is your tragic flaw?

my tragic flaw would have to be getting
influenced by other people i say this because i
mostly get in trouble for not telling or being
involved with something that my brother which
always sucks for me.

what character can you relate to?

i can relate to the guards because i have
been blamed for a lot of things that i did not
do and i have actually been punished for it
and then my parents found out that is was
not me that did this bad thing that i got
punished for. i know how that feels and
that sucks.

have you been meeting the benchmarks?

in this project i have met one of the
two requirements i got all the work turned in
but i did miss the date to turn in the first
draft i missed this because i got my backpack
taken by a random guy i turned in the first
and the last draft in one day so i missed one
of the two benchmarks but now i am cool and
i am on the wright track

what makes a good essay?

a good essay would have good sensory details
good use of language for example big words it would
also have a good start middle and end in the start
there should be amain idea and a couple of reasons
why you believe this idea then in the middle you
should go in to further details about the idea then at
the end there should be a strong statement to end it
and you should also restate the main idea in the essay.
now thats a good essay.

describe a time when you were hopeful about the future?

my dad told me that we were moving on my eighth grade
year and i was happy i could not wait till we would finally moved
he stopped talking about it then one day he took me and tony
out to dinner and he took us to a weird place in the bottoms and
he had the key he opened the door and said this is your new home
and from that point on me and my brother had a good house that
was not cluttered with a lot of stuff.

what have you learned in life that you used?

my parents have taught me a lot in my life but the most useful
thing they taught i think that when they try to teach me about god
that might be the most beneficial thing in life thet they have ever
taught me i think this because the bible and god touches on every
aspect of life that we live. i have many times tried to apply gods
word to the choices that i have made in my life and the choices that
i made when i did this have always had a good out come.thank you
mom and dad.

what have you learned in life that you used.

how does having Obama as your president change your life

i do not believe that any one involved in politics will do anything
for the better so in short this election will not change my life at all but
it will change the lives of people around me for example when he got
elected my grandma was crying and my dad said that if he got killed
then the whole town would go crazy so if he dies it will effect me in a
major way.

i could not open the ac lit blog page.

i did not hear the blog i was in iss

what part of your memoir needs revisions.

my memoir is actually o.k but i would 

like to use better wording i would like to use 

a lot more metaphors. that is all i would like

 to change.

feed back on memoir

the person that graded did not give me any 

feed back she said she did not have any feed back 

for me which i actually find really find hard to believe.

how do you want the reader to feel/think after they read your memior

i want people to be happy for me and see that
there parents can be cool at times and if they
do good in school and obey there parents then
hopefully there parents can be cool and they
will probaly have a good kid life or teenage life.

1check ms Laureens blog for writing
2check me and copy agenda

1check ms Laureens blog for writing
2check me and copy agenda

tyree for larine

last year i kept getting bad grades like a c or a c-
and i always got yelled at. on the last report card
i did real well and i'm going to tell you how and
why. my story goes like this. i went to school last
year and basicly just talked in class. i really
needed help in order to stop. i got disterbed very
easily in math because its boring so i needed motivation.
so my dad told me if i got an a in math he would
give me $100. i did it and i git that a in math and
i got the $100 and i bought close. that is a very
valuble lesson dont talk in class all it will do is
get you in trouble.